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A song I wrote before I went into recording

PostPosted: Mon Jul 26, 2010 7:58 pm
by TheOriginalToxxy
Hey, so if you didnt know, im in a band and were recording right now and I wrote this like a day before we started. I just found it again. its about one of my ex girlfriends and what she did to me.

A life dead to date
A life filled with hate!
Your life lives the day
Now you shall repay!

Kill now
What be
Youll suffer only from me!
Come now what may be!

Hate me
Hate this
Just slay the deadly kiss
Ill put a stop to this

No room
For change
Your army thats way to strange.

You give
I take
Tonight the dead will wake.

A spot
in hell
That spot which you will dwell

you saved
my life
you'll end it with a knife.

Hate me
Hate this
We can slay the deadly kiss
Ill put a stop to this

(solo)

Doesnt matter
anymore
bless the man who called you a whore.

all is lost
all is raped
nothing ever belonged
shouldent have come to this

Today!
Ill break free!
Ov everything youve done to me!

Hate me
Hate this
Just kill the deadly kiss
Ill put a stop to this

Re: A song I wrote before I went into recording

PostPosted: Mon Jul 26, 2010 8:14 pm
by crait
That's dark, dude... When do you think you'll be done so I can hear it? :D

Re: A song I wrote before I went into recording

PostPosted: Mon Jul 26, 2010 9:28 pm
by TheOriginalToxxy
Well, we had out first recording sesion last week. and that didnt go so well considering my guitars keep breaking. but we recorded all the drum parts so were waiting to get a local bassist in here to record some bass lines. but ill be putting the song on guitar pro so you can get a seek peek of it.

Re: A song I wrote before I went into recording

PostPosted: Mon Jul 26, 2010 10:22 pm
by The Cookie Monster
nice lyrics, and I'm guessing you're doing metal?

Re: A song I wrote before I went into recording

PostPosted: Mon Jul 26, 2010 11:04 pm
by TheOriginalToxxy
You guessed right.

Re: A song I wrote before I went into recording

PostPosted: Mon Jul 26, 2010 11:06 pm
by Puncharger
Reminds me of Godsmack

Re: A song I wrote before I went into recording

PostPosted: Tue Jul 27, 2010 11:50 am
by TheOriginalToxxy
I dont even like Godsmack

Re: A song I wrote before I went into recording

PostPosted: Tue Jul 27, 2010 9:31 pm
by Puncharger
Why not? their awesome.

Re: A song I wrote before I went into recording

PostPosted: Tue Jul 27, 2010 10:59 pm
by TheOriginalToxxy
I dunno. Just dont appeal to me.